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Fawkes Posted 9 years ago
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IELTS Writing Task 1 - Table

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category -2002

Country

Food/Drinks/Tobacco

Clothing/Footwear

Leisure/Education

Ireland

28.91%

6.43%

2.21%

Italy

16.36%

9.00%

3.20%

Spain

18.80%

6.51%

1.98%

Sweden

15.77%

5.40%

3.22%

Turkey

32.14%

6.63%

4.35%


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Please help review my writing below and give me percent as grade if possible. For example, 60% if it's bad, 80% if it's ok or more if you're really like it. Many thanks.

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The given table illustrates expenses on three different categories of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey the year 2002.

At the first glance, it is clear that Food/Drinks/Tobacco accounted for largest spending of these five countries and the resident here spent just a little for Leisure/Education.

Turkey spent the most in Food and Beverage, which was 32.14%, following by Ireland with 28.91%. The figure for Spain, Italy and Sweden was slightly less, 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77 respectively.

The amount of money that these national consumers had for Clothes/Footwear was just around 5%. Only Italy people spent more on this category, 9%. Entertainment and Education accounted for the smallest expense of these Europe countries with all proportion were less than 5%. 1.98%, the smallest, was what Spain had for this category in 2002.

  

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  • The given table illustrates (lists) expenses on three different categories of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey (missing word) the year 2002.
  • ) At the first glance, it is clear that Food/Drinks/Tobacco accounted for (missing word) largest spending (The table is very tricky , so you have to be very careful and precise with your words.
  • In particular, the percentages do not add up to 100%, so you cannot say anything in absolute terms.
  • 55%.
  • 45% of Irish spending (more than 70% for Italy) that is not accounted for.
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