IELTS Writing Task 1 - Report - Bar chart

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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The chart illustrates the percentage of unemployed women in four countries of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. The four countries are England, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland.

Overall, female unemployment rates have a downward trend for England, Wales and Northern Ireland from 2013 to 2014 while the percentage of that went up in Scotland.

In concerned with England, the rate of women with no jobs was relatively high in 2013. Then there was a slight decrease of 0.3% in 2014. On the contrary, Scottish unemployed women increase to 6.7% in 2014, becoming the highest rate In England.

Wales and Northern Ireland had a similar downward rate. In 2013, the female unemployment rate of Northern Ireland was slightly higher than that of Wales. However, the figure for Northern Ireland significantly fell down, which is a decrease of 10% during this period. Therefore, the rate of unemployed female in Northern Ireland was the lowest in the four countries of England in 2014.