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A glance at the line graph provided reveals some striking different between the radio and television audiences in the Uk during the period from October to December 1992. It is evident that more people were watching television at 7pm than at any other time, and radio was the most popular at 7.30 am.

In the 6 first hours, the percentage of people listening to the radio outnumbered that of television viewers. Both started at a low point of less than 10% at early 6 am. Increasing suddenly in the viewers of radio approximately 37% at 7.30 am, but later fallen modestly to around 12% at noon. Meanwhile, there was a upward trend in the size of the TV audiences to reach an equal level to that of radio viewers at midday.

The number of people watching TV then saw a marked increase, reaching a peak at over 50% at 7 pm, which was double the highest percentage of listeners radio. However, the firgue for people who watched TV then slide away to the end at under 10% of population, while there was a gently downturn for radio until the end of the day, to fisnish at a low of around 10%.