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The bar chart below shows the estimated sale of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The column chart gives an estimate on the next year about sales of jeans of two companies in Turkey while the pie chart compares their estimated market share.

Overall, it is obvious that jeans sales are estimated to increase in the next year whilst Jack & Jones and Mango are participated to have half of the market share.

According to the first graph, in January, Jack & Jones jeans sales will sell around 450,000 pairs, 3 times as many as that of Mango. For next five months, Jack & Jones is projected to remain steadily at this level. However, in July and August, demand for Mango jeans is forecast to exceed those of Jack & Jones jeans. Concretely, Mango sales will a great amount 500,000 pairs in comparison with 400,000 pairs of Jack & Jones ones. By the end of the year, Jack & Jones will be witnessed a surge at peak of 900,000 pairs while Mango is forecast approximately 600,000 pairs.

It is predicted that Jack & Jones will control one-third of market share while Mango will have one-fifth market share. The remaining a half will be controlled by the other jeans manufacturers.