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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table illustrates the proportion of 6800 Scottish citizens aged above 16 participating in cultural activities over a period of 12 months.
Generally speaking, most of Scottish adults had done any performance in the past 12 months. It is also clear that the younger they were, the more activities they took part in.
According to the table, the majority of them enrolled in any performance and visual arts. 35% of people aged 16-24 joined in any performance, while the proportions from other groups stood between 17% and 22%. Regarding visual arts, the highest percentage came from the 16-24 group, with 35%, while the figures for 25-44, 45-74 and over 16 were 16%, 11% and 15% respectively.
Those figures of any performance and visual arts were followed by the statistics of undertaking any crafts, cultural purchases, any writing and computer based. There were 11% to 22% of people engaging in the two former activities, with the proportions of people aged 45-74 and over 16 dominating. In contrast, the figures for any writing and computer based were only around 5% and 9% for the 25-45, 45-74, and over 16 groups. Additionally, these numbers rose to 17% and 10% for the 16-24 cohort.
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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. The table illustrates the proportion of 6800 Scottish citizens aged above 16 participating in cultural activities over a period of 12 months. Generally speaking, most of Scottish adults had done any performance in the past 12 months.
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
- The table illustrates the proportion of 6800 Scottish citizens aged above 16 participating in cultural activities over a period of 12 months.
- Generally speaking, most of Scottish adults had done any performance in the past 12 months.
- It is also clear that the younger they were, the more activities they took part in.
- According to the table, the majority of them enrolled in any performance and visual arts.
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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table illustrates the proportion of 6800 Scottish citizens aged above 16 participating in cultural activities over a period of 12 months.
Generally speaking, most of Sco
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