IELTS writing task 1. Please help me to check this essay. Thank you so much.
The table shows information on consumer expenditure on 3 kinds of item in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Overall, it can be seen that Food/Drinks/Tobacco was kind of item being spent money most while the opposite was true for Leisure/Education item.
The most expenditure for Food/Drinks/Tobacco was belonging to Turkey, which was roughly 2 times as much as Sweden, with 32,14 per cent. Meanwhile, Ireland and Turkey spent more 25 per cent for these kind of item while the expenditure of 3 other countries was just under 20 per cent. Besides, the lowest money that was spent for Clothing/Footwear item was also belonging to Sweden with 5,40 per cent. In the other hand, Italy was nation being spent most money for these item.
According to Leisure/Education item, the most expenditure for these item was from Turkey with 4,35 per cent while the opposite was true for Spain with approximately 2 per cent. In addition, the figure for 3 other countries was fluctuation between 2 and 4 per cent respectively.
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I have highlighted the text with poor English or mistakes. You do not use singular/plural nouns correctly. In Task 1, do not attempt to use synonyms until you learn subtle differences between vocabulary words.
- I have highlighted the text with poor English or mistakes.
- You do not use singular/plural nouns correctly.
- In Task 1, do not attempt to use synonyms until you learn subtle differences between vocabulary words.
- The table shows information on consumer expenditure (spending) on 3 (three) kinds of item (singular/plural) in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
- Overall, it can be seen that Food/Drinks/Tobacco was kind (singular/plural) of item being spent money most while the opposite was true for Leisure/Education item .
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I have highlighted the text with poor English or mistakes. You do not use singular/plural nouns correctly. In Task 1, do not attempt to use synonyms until you learn subtle differences between vocabulary words.
The table shows information on consumer expenditure (spending) on 3
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