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Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

Age group	Female	Male
0-9	51.3	50.3
10-17	42.2	24.6
18-39	17.1	9.7
40-59	12.3	8.0
60+	18.5	13.2

The table provided above presents data on proportion of population in a town who cycled in 2011 by five age groups and genders.
Overall, females were shown to enjoy riding bicycles more than males in all age groups, and children and adolescents cycled more than their senior counterparts.
Over half of the residents aged between 0-9 were cyclists, occupying 51.3% and 50.3% of the female and male populations. Females in the 10-17 age group were slightly less interested in cycling in comparison, having only 42.2% being cyclists; however, the figures for their male counterpart showed the males had far less interest in cycling when they reached adolescence, with a staggering drop to only 24.6% of the population. The percentage of cyclists in the two subsequent age groups saw a sharp decline for both genders, which was below 20% of the population for females and below 10% for males. However, in the 60+ age group, the figures slightly rose for both females and males to 18.5% and 13.2%, respectively.
In regard to how the residents' interest in cycling differed between two genders, while the percentage of female and male cyclists were comparable in the 0-9 age group, the percentage of female cyclists outnumbered their male counterpart in the other age groups by a large margin.