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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph given illustrates number of people moving from rural to urban areas from 2000 to 2025 in Iran, Indonesia and Russia.

In general, all three nations followed an upward trend in the movement of residents. It is expected that Iran will experience the most dramatic increasing, while the statistic of Indonesia will be the lowest.

Starting at approximately 17 million in 2000, the number of people in Russia grown noticeably to nearly 45 million after 10 years. Compared to that of Russia, Iran started with a slower figure which was 8 million. After that, the statistics of Iran remained around 10 million in the initial five years before rising sharply to 35 million people in 2010. In the next decade, both Russia and Iran escalated gradually and reached 80 million in 2020. However, Iran is forecasted to witness an acceleration of 15 million in the next five years, higher than that of Russia.

Regarding Indonesia, standing at exactly 10 million, the statistics experienced a steady rise in the period from 2000 to 2020, reaching a peak of 30 million. Then, it is predicted that the number will level off over the remaining years.