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The table shows the numbers of visitors going to Ashdown Museum in a year before and after changes were made to the museum. The percentages of six level of satisfaction of customers ranging from very satisfied to very dissatisfied and no response during the two years are plotted on the pie charts, each for one year.

After refurbishment, the museum saw a rise in the total number of entries from 74000 up to 92000. There was also changes in visitor's attitude from mostly negative to very positive.

In details, the proportion of visitors who find the experience very satisfied increased by 20% from 15% to 35%. Similarly, visitors that feel satisfied accounted for 10% more from 30% to 40% after the museum was renovated.

The percentages pf negative reviews saw a drop in all categories. The value of dissatisfied reviews fell from 40% to 15% . There was also a 50% reduction in very dissatisfied reviews, from a 10% value to just 5%. However, the fraction of visitors who refuse to response maintained at 5% level in both two years.

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The table shows the numbers of visitors going to Ashdown Museum in a (wrong word) year (wrong for) before and after changes were made to the museum. The percentages of six level of satisfaction of customers (wrong word) ranging from very satisfied to very dissatisfied and no response during the two years are plotted on the pie charts, each for one year.

(That sentence is too convoluted. Also you do not mention that this data came from visitor surveys.

The figures (a table and two pie charts) show the changes in attendance and visitor satisfaction after the renovation of the Ashdown Museum. The table lists the numbers of visitors for the years before and after the renovation. The two pie charts show the levels of visitor satisfaction in four categories: very satisfied, satisfied, dissatisfied, and very dissatisfied. The data on the first pie chart is from questionnaires taken the year before, and the second is the results of the same survey taken the year following the renovation.

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After refurbishment, the museum saw a 24% rise in the total number of entries (wrong word) from 74000 up to 92000. There was (wrong form) also changes in visitor's attitude from mostly negative to very positive. Most visitors responded to the survey; only one in 20 gave no response.

In details, the proportion of visitors who find the experience very satisfied (wrong form) increased by 20% from 15% to 35%. Similarly, visitors that feel satisfied accounted for 10% more from 30% to 40% after the museum was renovated.

The percentages pf negative reviews (ratings) saw a drop in all (There were only 2.) categories. The ~~value~~ percentage of dissatisfied reviews fell from 40% to 15% . There was also a 50% reduction in very dissatisfied reviews, from a 10% value to just 5%. However, the fraction of visitors who refuse to response maintained at (missing word) 5% level (A fraction would be 1/20.) in both two years.

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