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The two pie charts illustrate the outcome of a survey conducted to figure out factors determining people’s happiness in two age groups.

Overall, it is clear that people in two groups have both alike and different sources of happiness.

Looking at the similarities, the percentage of happiness generated from achievement at work of two age groups is about the same, at nearly one-third. In addition, the proportions of people finding satisfaction doing hobbies are roughly equal, with 22% for the younger group and approximately a quarter for the older group.

Turning now to the differences, while 14% of older people questioned feel pleased with their family’s reunion, a similar number of the young feel joyful with exploring new places. Furthermore, whereas having a good appearance is an essential factor of happiness for 18% of people in the younger group, financial security makes one-fifth of the older people surveyed satisfied.