IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Money spent on books

The graph above shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005

My answer:

The line graph compares the expenditure on books of people in four different nations from 1995 to 2005.

Overall, it is clear that people in Germany spent more on books than those in other three countries. However, spending on books increased in all four countries over the period of 10 years.

In 1995. $80 million spent on books in Germany. This figure then continued increasing over the period, and reached its highest point, at almost $100 million in 2005. The amount of money spent on books in France in 1995 stood at $55 million. The figure for Italy and Austria in the same year were lower, at exactly $50 million and $30 million respectively.

Over the period between 1995 and 2005, the expenditure on books in France witness a steady increase, this figure finally reached the peak of $75 million in 2005. Despite fluctuations, spending on books in both nations Italy and Austria rose gradually to $60 million in 2003. Throughout the remainder of the period, the figure for Austria had gone up to over $70 million by the year 2005, compared to just over $60 million in Italy.

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