IELTS Writing Task 1: Map (Please help me to correct)
Writing task 1 – Cam 13:
The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Answer:
The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a city hospital in three years from 2007 to 2010.
The main characteristic of this map is the changes of bus stop, car park and crosses which were replaced by bus station and roundabouts.
From the north to the south, the ring road around hospital and city road remained unchanged. In 2010, the crosses between hospital roads with ring road and city road were replaced by two roundabouts.
From the west to the east, there was a new public car park in the east of ring road around the city hospital in 2010 and the west of city hospital stayed the same with 2007. The public carpark and staff car park were separated in contrast to figure of 2007. The bus stops on two sides of hospital road in 2007 were changed to bus station in the west of this road. The bus station were connected to roundabouts. In the east of hospital road were a staff carpark.
Top answer
I have highlighted the errors. Names of roads and buildings are proper nouns and must be capitalized. The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a C ity H ospital over in three years , from 2007 to 2010.
- I have highlighted the errors.
- Names of roads and buildings are proper nouns and must be capitalized.
- The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a C ity H ospital over in three years , from 2007 to 2010.
- ) and crosses (wrong word) which were replaced by a bus station and roundabouts.
- From the north to the south, the ring road around the hospital and ci ty ro ad remained unchanged.
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I have highlighted the errors. Names of roads and buildings are proper nouns and must be capitalized.
The maps illustrate the changes in road access to a City Hospital over in three
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