IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - MAP

Dear AlpheccaStars,

Please help me by reviewing this report.

Changes that took place on the way to enter the city hospital in 2007 and 2010 are shown on the two maps. It is clear that the road to the hospital was more accessible and there were marked improvement in the road infrastructure in 2010.

Looking at the map in more details, to the west of Hospital Road, the threes bus stops were removed to make place for a bus station in the next three years. The opposite area where bus stops and a parking lot for both public car and staff car used to share was car park for staff only. Meanwhile, a new car park for city citizens was constructed right next to the hospital.

Two turnabout were built at the intersection between City Road and Hospital and that between Ring Road and City Road, making it convenient to park car in the new location. In addition, two small roads were constructed in the bus station which linked the two turnaround while the building, Ring Road and City Road were well-preserved.

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