Ielts writing task 1 - Line Graph
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The line graph compares the number of books that read by boys and girls in Starmouth School Library between 2009 and 2012.
Overall, there was different trend for both students. Although girls read more books than boys, their reading fell to below the level of boys over the four-year period.
In 2009, girls started reading around 50 books, twice as many as boys, over 20 books. Then, there was a noticeable growth in the quantity of books read by girls, hit the highest point at 100 from 2009 to 2011 before continuing to decline by 20 books in 2012.
Turning to boys’ curve, their book numbers rose slightly to 40 in 2010, at which point the number of library books read by them went up to the same level as their counterpart, at 100 books. Afterward, the number for boys reached its peak of 140 books, which was higher than girls at the end of the period.
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The line graph compares the number of books that read by boys and girls in Starmouth School Library between 2009 and 2012. Overall, there was different trend for both students. Although girls read more books than boys , their reading fell to below the level of boys over the four-year period.
- The line graph compares the number of books that read by boys and girls in Starmouth School Library between 2009 and 2012.
- Overall, there was different trend for both students.
- Although girls read more books than boys , their reading fell to below the level of boys over the four-year period.
- You have the curves backwards, so you will not get a good score.
- The blue line is for the girls, and the pink line is boys.
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The line graph compares the number of books that read by boys and girls in Starmouth School Library between 2009 and 2012.
Overall, there was different trend for both students. Although girls read more books than boys, their reading fell to below the level of boys over the four-year period.
You have the curves backwards, so you will
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