Ielts writing task 1 - Line Graph
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Topic: The graph below shows home heating fuel choice according to the year the house was built. ( I can't insert the image so please click to the link to see it: ( https://www.google.com/search?q=heating+fuel+ielts&sxsrf=ALeKk02VMX6t4ExD0qRbMsPvlU1Wft1Fcw:1629049233072&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjb9O6mybPyAhUUdt4KHZW-BgMQ_AUoAXoECAIQAw&biw=1280&bih=609#imgrc=0Mm_3ASTA4RpAM )
The graph compares and contrasts two choices of heating fuel at home over the period of housing construction years.
As can be seen from the graph, more and more people preferred using electricity, while the percentage of choosing natural gas witnessed an upward trend throughout the period.
During the first two periods, the consumption of natural gas remained stable at 60%, at which point, there was a steady fall to around 40% from 1970 to 1989 before leveling off at there over the next 21 years.
Turning to another option, more than 10% of households used electricity to heat fuel until the year 1950, which was less than those constructed at the same time. It is worth pointing out that this type increased gradually to its highest point at almost 45% as an equal percentage of homes built selecting natural gas for fuel heating at the end of the period.
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I would be grateful if someone here could provide some comments. Thank you a lot. The graph compares and contrasts two choices of heating fuel at home over the period of housing construction years.
- I would be grateful if someone here could provide some comments.
- Thank you a lot.
- The graph compares and contrasts two choices of heating fuel at home over the period of housing construction years.
- As can be seen from the graph, more and more people preferred using electricity, while the percentage of choosing natural gas witnessed an upward trend throughout the period.
- During the first two periods, the consumption of natural gas remained stable at 60%, at which point, there was a steady fall to around 40% from 1970 to 1989 before leveling off at there over the next 21 years.
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0You barely wrote 150 words, so you risk writing not enough next time. This is not a very good practice test because it is extremely simple.
The graph (what kind of graph is it?) compares and contrasts two choices of heating fuel at home over the period of housing construction years.
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