Ielts Writing Task 1- Exercise 1

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The table shows the number of hours of spare time every year that people in different ages use in some activities. Overall, people in all ages spend most of their leisure time watching TV or videos, while spending their free for cinema is the least.

In terms of watching TV or videos, teenagers and people in their over 70s watch TV and videos the most with 1,200 and 1,100 hours of their leisure time respectively, which are nearly three times as many as that of people in their 30s. With socializing with four or less people, the number of people in their 30s makes use of 300 hours to do this activity which is twice more frequent than that of teen and people in 20s.

However, teenagers and people from 30 to 40 years old take part in social activities the same number of hours with 350 hours of their free time , while the figure of people from the 50s to the over 70s in their use of their spare time for this activity are only 25 hours. With individual exercises, 200 hours are the number of hours that people from 30s to 40s do, which is four times more regular than that of people in their 50s.

In terms of group exercise or sports, teenagers and 20s still spend the highest amount of time with 450 and 350 hours respectively compared with the other group, but people in their 60s and those are over 70s do not join this activity. People from 40s to 50s just spend 25 hours to watch cinema, which is less than 4 times the numbers of hours that teens practice this activity.

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The table shows the number of hours of spare time every year that people in different ages ( of different ages, in different age groups) use in some (devote to six different leisure -- be precise!) activities. Overall, people in all ages spend most of their leisure time watching TV or videos and the least on going to the cinema. ~~while spending their free for cinema is the least~~. (In terms of the most and least popular activities, age does not make any difference; watching TV is most and cenema is the least popular.)

In terms of watching TV or videos, teenagers and people in their over 70s watch TV and videos the most with 1,200 and 1,100 hours of their leisure time respectively, which is ~~are~~ nearly three times as many as that of people in their 30s. With socializing with four or less people, the number of people in their 30s makes use of 300 hours to do this activity which is twice more ~~frequent~~ than that of teen and people in (missing word) 20s.

Model paragraph:

In terms of differences among the age groups, watching TV or videos showed a major distinction. Those in the extreme age groups, teenagers and people over 70, watch TV and videos the most, 1,200 and 1,100 hours respectively. That is nearly three times that of people in their 30s, who spent the least, 400 hours, on this category. Another significant difference was socializing with four or more people. As people grow older, they spend much less time socializing in large groups. People under 30 spend 350 hours per year, whereas those 50 and older spend less than 10% of that, 25 hours. The same downward trend is shown for participating in team sports, with the maximum being for teenagers (450 hours) to no participation at all for people over 60 and older.

However, teenagers and people from 30 to 40 years old take part in social activities (there are 2 categories of "social activities") the same number of hours with 350 hours of their free time , while the figure of people from the 50s to the over 70s in their use of their spare time for this activity are only 25 hours. With individual exercises, 200 hours are the number of hours that people from 30s to 40s do, which is four times more regular than that of people in their 50s.

In terms of group exercise or sports, teenagers and 20s ~~still~~ spend the highest amount of time with 450 and 350 hours respectively (missing punctuation) compared with the other group, but people in their 60s and those are over 70s do not join this activity. People from 40s to 50s just spend 25 hours to watch (wrong form) cinema, which is less than 4 times the numbers of hours that teens practice this activity.

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