IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Could you please help me to correct my essay

The given maps illustrate the layout of two different type of rooms utilized for students at an Austraulian university.

It can clearly be seen that having a bigger area, the room for two people is designed with more amenities including study desks, table and chairs to bring to occupants the most confortable space. Together with mordern appliances and amenity is the high in cost of two-person room, which is higher than that of single room.

Looking at the information in more detail, although two-person room and single room have a same widthwise, the two-person room has longer lenthwise, which makes the room bigger (6m*4m and 6m*2.5m, respectively) and cost more than single room ($350/week and $200/week, respectively). A bathroom is arranged at the North-West corner of both rooms. Taking at look at a kitchen area, while single room is just simply equipped with fundamental appliances such as a microwave, a stove and a sink, a table and chairs are delibrately arrange in the kitchen area of the two-person room for occupants can watch TV which is put in the South-West of the room.

As illustration, both rooms have a bed and study desk for each student, so there is only one bed and study desk in single room, but there are two beds and desks for occupants in two-person room. In the single room, a TV is put at the opposite of the desk and the bed in order to enable an occupant to watch TV for entertainment. The arrangement in two-person room is a little bit different, thanks to its bigger size, a bookself is arranged next the study desks 1 and a cupboard is put between bed 1 and bed 2 in order to make personal space for occupants.