IELTS Writing task 1 (Can anyone please give me feedback on my essay?)

The charts below show the amount of spending on 6 consumer goods by 4 countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the amount of expenditure on six different items, which are personal stereos, tennis rackets, perfumes, CDs, toys, and photographic film, in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain. Units are measured in thousand pounds sterling.

Overall, British people spent significantly more than people in the other three countries on all six goods. Out of the six items, consumers spent the most on photographic film.

In detail, the expenditure of the British on each category ranged from 155,000 to just over 170,000 pounds sterling, with personal stereos receiving the least amount of spending and photographic film receiving the most. By contrast, Germans were the lowest overall spenders, with roughly the same figures (just under 150,000 pounds sterling) for each of the six products.

Notably, the Italian and French people spent the same amount of nearly 160,000 pounds sterling on toys. Regarding personal stereos, tennis rackets, and perfumes, the Italian were the bigger spenders with approximately 150,000 pounds sterling for each item. The opposite was true for the categories of CDs and photographic film which recorded a higher amount of spending by French people, at just under 160,000 and 170,000 respectively.