Ielts Writing task 1- Bar chart

The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries between 2009 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart provided gives information about the employment data in various tourist industries between 2009 and 2019. In general, travel and culture provided least number of job, and travel was the only service witness the decrease after 10 years

As it can be seen from the graph that, in 2009, Hotel and accommodation was the service that have the most number of employees with 299.2 thousands. Standing at the second place was Sports which attracted 284.7 thousand workers, just less than the first place nearly 15 thousands. Food industries with 283.4 thousand employees working become the third largest tourist working labor.

10 years after, in 2019, all the tourism-related industries experienced significant changes. The number of people working in food service industry increase rapidly, by 20% to become the leading service in the tourism industry. Sports and accomodation showed slight and stable rise of 60 thousands and 7 thousands workers respectively, and they were still two out of three biggest industries. Culture after ten years was the only service witnessed a decline in number of employee and was the least attractive working area to the workers.