Ielts writing task 1 (bar chart)

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

MY REPORT

The bar chart shows us about the amount of earned money of the Someland's exports in three main caterogies: Meat products, Dairy products and International tourism. Each of them is reported in three different years: the year 2005, 2015 and 2025.

Overall, the money that gets from the meat products after each period of 10 years. In opposite, the international tourism increased gradually. About the dairy products, at first it increased sharply in 2015 but in the next ten years it will decrease slightly.

In the year 2005, the meat products was at the highest position of three years with about 4 USD billions. But it increased by 0.5 USD billions in 2015 and will decline to 3 USD billions in 2025. About the international tourism, although it happens in the predictable way just like the meat products but it increases gradually. In the first year, it was approximately 6.2 USD billions and increased gently to 6.9 USD billions in 2015. In the next ten years, it will continuously rise up and reach about 7.9 USD billions in 2025.

Next, about the dairy products, the difference between two different years (2005 and 2015) was quite big (approximately 3 USD billions ). However, it declined modestly to about 7.4 USD billions in the last year of the period.

I hope that i have improved. Thank you for checking it for me. And can i ask how many points do i get?