Ielts writing task 1
The bar chart highlights information about the number of young people who elevated education for four county in 2000, 2005, 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in participation rate of young people attending higher education in three countries: A, C and D, exception for country B. Another interesting point is that country D was the most popular young people in higher education.
Looking at details, as regards country A. The number of young people in higher education was over 30% in 2000, this meant that it had the lowest people in issue of four situations. After that, there was a fluctuation over the next ten years, at which point it levelled off at just under 60% in 2010. If we look at country D, the trend was similar. Having remained stable at approximately 50% in 2000, the rates then rose slightly next 10 years, reached a peak of 60% at the end of the period. And the rates country C fluctuated and then levelled off over 40% in 2010.
On the other hand, the percentage in country B having remained stable at approximately 40% until 2000. After that, despite falling slightly to 38% in 2005, the figure then increased 2% in 2010
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