Ielts writing task 1

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The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of males and females that successfully got driver's license after they took the driving test in a specific Asian country from 1980 to 2010.

In general, the figure for women and men passed the driving test was an increase trend.

The percentage of women got driver's license rose slightly from under 50% in 1980 to over 50% in 1990, after which it went up significantly around 70% in 2000. There was a gradual fall to about 65% in the number of women who passed in 2010.

Looking at the chart in more details, the proportion of men passed the test increase considerably between under 30% to around 40% in 1980 and 1990. In the period from 1990 to 2000, the rate of men got the license increase rapidly to under 50% after that in the year 2010 it stayed at the same at the number of 2010.