Ielts Writing Task 1

Please correct this essay for me. Thnk you !

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The given chart gives information about the process of making perfume production by using oil.

Overall, there are five steps. Starting with boiling water and ending with leading hydrolat solid into the industry.

In the first step, water is boiled. Then, the steam will be led into a tube containing aromatic plants and will be sorted. Next, the steam continues to be conducted to the oil vapor.

In the following stage, the steam will be condensed respectively to hot and cold water. After that, the steam will transform into water mixed with oil. The solid will be directed to the separator. The oil will be filtered and used for production. The system will take hydrolat, which is the aromatic water, and continue to have more progress to sort the solid. And that is the end stage of the progress.