IELTS Writing task 1

The data gives information about the proportion of British who bought 3 types of music as reported by age group and sex.
In general, both 3 types of music album was bought by man is higher than woman. On the other hand, people on the group 16-24 of age had the lowest percentage on purchasing Classical album.
It is clear that, Britain spent more money to buy Rock and Pop music than the Classical type. People who is male and female had the same proportion on pay for Pop and Rock music album, which is nearly 30 and 20 percent while Classical album only as one-third as others (approximately 10% and 7%).
The graph shows that proportion of UK people who spent money for Pop and Rock album is equal, accounting for 30,31,25 and 8 percentage 16-24, 25-34, 35-44, and 45+ group of age. Althought Classical album's buyer of 45+ people is twice as 2 other, there is only 3% who is belong to 35-44 years old. Especially the youngest age group tend to listen to Pop and Rock music, so there is only 1% shared.