IELTS Writing Task 1

The bar chart gives information about three difficult things that people have to face when they live abroad by age group.

Overall, both people who were in the 35-54 age group and the over 55 age group have a major concern for sorting out their healthcare. Meanwhile, the biggest problem in the 18-34 age group is sorting out their finances. By contrast, the smallest problem of three groups is finding schools for their children.

In the middle-aged and the over 55 age group, the percentage of people who want to sort out their healthcare is 37% people and 36% people, % respectively. By contrast, this figure in the 16-34 age group is simpler than that of the others

The second biggest problem in the 35-54 age group is sorting out their finances ( 35%). On the other hand, financial management of people who are 16-34 years old and over 55 years old is quite easier, which is about 33% and 28%, respectively.

People over the age of 55, they do not have to worry about finding school for their children ( 2%). By contrast, choosing the place where their children can study is the common concern of people aged 16-35 years old ( 6%) and 35-54 years old ( 18%).