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Blue ocean Posted 5 years ago
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The grouped bar chart shows transport preferences among young people from different countries. In general, car is the most favorite mode in most surveyed nations while the preferences for motorcycle and bicycle vary depending on countries.

To specify, the percentage of people in Great Britain like traveling by car most is 60%, the same as in the USA, while the figure in Germany drops to 40% and rises to more than 70% in France. Although motorcycles are more popular than cycling among young American with the percentage of 30, it is the least favorite in three other countries. Each respective rate with Great Britain, Germany and France is 10%, around 15% and 10%. Bicycles are preferred least in the USA meanwhile being the top choice of young German and is the second favorite mode in Great Britain and France.
Strikingly, the percentage of the least transport mode in Great Britain, USA and France is the same with 10%, only the one of Germany is around 15% for motorcycle.

  

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The grouped bar chart shows transport preferences among young people from different countries. In general, car is the most favorite mode in most surveyed nations while the preferences for motorcycle and bicycle vary depending on countries. To specify, the percentage of people in Great Britain like traveling by car most is 60%, the same as in the USA, while the figure in Germany drops to 40% and is more than 70% in France.

  • The grouped bar chart shows transport preferences among young people from different countries.
  • In general, car is the most favorite mode in most surveyed nations while the preferences for motorcycle and bicycle vary depending on countries.
  • To specify, the percentage of people in Great Britain like traveling by car most is 60%, the same as in the USA, while the figure in Germany drops to 40% and is more than 70% in France.
  • Although motorcycles are more popular than cycling among young American with the percentage of 30, it is the least favorite in three other countries.
  • The figure one for Great Britain, Germany and France is respectively 10%, around 15% and 10%.
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The grouped bar chart shows transport preferences (What are the different transports?) among young people from different (How many? What are they?) countries. (The description is very incomplete. You have changed topics from discussing the figure to pointing out the main features. You must start a new paragraph if you change topics.)

In general,

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