IELTS WRITING TASK 1

Given in the plan provided is the difference of Grange park since 1920 to nowadays. Overall what stands out from these maps is that the entertainment areas of the park has been significantly invested for expanding and more moderenize.
First and foremost, Grange park has altered considerably since then and the most striking change is in the center of the park where the fountain has been converted into rose garden with a surrounding of stood. Additionally, to the West of the park, the bandstand has also replaced for an amphitheater of concerts and associate seating as well as the rose garden in the bottom left concern of the map on the same side.
Secondly, another development has been appeared by the characteristic of water with a new entrance for an underground car park. Meanwhile, the water plants’ pond and rose garden in the right-top of the park was make away for a children play’s area and near this place, a café was also built