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KamiSuzuki Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS Writing task 1

The given diagram illustrates the process of producing carbornated drinks in a factory.


Overall, although there are several steps in this production line, there are only 5 main stages of this process.


The process begins with cleaning the water in stage 1 by putting raw water from nature through a filter and a water softener with chemicals respectively. After that, it went to a pump to prepare for stage 2, which heats evaporation and carbonation into the water. The water was put into electric heaters, then transported through a cooling pipe to a pot of carbon dioxide.


The carbonated water was devliverd through a long pipe to a mixing tank for stage 3: mixing. Connected to the mixing tank was 3 small container of colouring, syrup and flavor. The mixed water then went through a filter and was ready for the stage of filtering and filling. There are two types of filling: in bottles and in cans. The last stage of this process is packaging and sending them to the supermarket.

  

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Can you show us the diagram please? Click on: - Reply - Attach images (near the top right) - Choose Files (upload the image) - Add to post

  • Can you show us the diagram please?
  • Click on: - Reply - Attach images (near the top right) - Choose Files (upload the image) - Add to post
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Can you show us the diagram please?

Click on:
- Reply
- Attach images (near the top right)
- Choose Files (upload the image)
- Add to post

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I cannot help you much without the figure. However, there are many grammatical problems with your writing. They are highlighted below. When you start an essay in a verb tense, either present or past, you must use it consistently in the entire essay.



The given diagram illustrates the process of producing

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