Ielts writing task 1

The line chart below compares the number of people moving in 3 countries and guessing for the future.

Overall, the number of people from 3 countries denote through 3 color lines. Iran is green, Indonesia is red, and Russia in blue. In prediction, 3 numbers increase each year.

In 2000, this number was the lowest in all of the years of 3 countries. That country has the highest count is Russia with around 15 million people and the lowest is Iran with approximately 10 million people. In the middle it was Indonesia.

After that, this count of numbers continually rose to 2020 even if 2050 depend on predictions. In 2050 the rank in the number of people in 3 countries is change. The first is Iran with 95 million people that remarkable when we compare it with ones in 2000. The second is Russia with around 90 million people. This figure leap compares with 200. Finally, Indonesia has figure is lowest with approximately 30 million people.

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