Ielts writing task 1

The table demonstrates the number of tourists to Ashdown Museum during a year before and after renovation, concurrently, the pie charts illustrates visitors’ satisfaction.

Overall, the most pronounced observation is that after redevelopment, the Museum attracted a larger number of tourists, 92000, compared to 74000 before refurbishment. Following that, there was an increasing number of people who fulfill their hope after the trip to the museum.

In the year before renovation, 40 percent of people felt dissatisfied with their trip to Ashdown Museum. One third of them are satisfied and 15% are very satisfied. Following that, guesses who are very disappointed about the Museum accounted for 10% of total and the rest have no response to the trip.

However, the shares has changed a lot since the redevelopment. There was an increase by 10 percent and 20 percent in the number of people who are satisfied and very satisfied respectively. By contrast, people who are dissatisfied went down by a quarter. Visitors feeling very dissatisfied was only 5 percent in the year after refurbishment. The number of people who had no response stayed the same through the period.