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The pie chart plot the proportion of four agricultural products: Vegetables, Dairy, Grain and Meat in two various regions: Western and Eastern of a country.

In general, the percentages of farm products in Eastern was different from Western, except for the values of Meat, which was 35 percent.

In Eastern, the most abundant product was Meat, with 35 percent. Following this, Dairy was the second highest percentages of agricultural goods and a gap between Meat and Dairy was only five percent. Twenty percent was the value vegetables contributed in agricultural production while grain stayed at the lowest proportion with fifteen percent.

In comparison with Eastern, eighty percent of agricultural products in Western were Grain and Meat, particularly, grain was in the top proportion with 45 percent, followed by Meat, 35 percent. Moreover, there was an unbalance of allocating agricultural production in Western, just only five percent of Vegetables was recorded and the left product was Dairy with fifteen percent in overall.