IELTS Writing Task 1
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The given table illustrates the amount of income that New Zealand earned from exporting Kiwi fruit to five various nations in three years 2010, 2011 and 2012. Units are measured in NZ$.
Overall, Japan is the largest Kiwi export market in New Zealand. It is also noticeable that the expenditure on the Kiwi of Japan, China, Russia increased while the figure of Mexico and Saudi Arabia declined.
As can be seen from the table, New Zealand earned NZ$ 271.1 million in 2010 to NZ$ 287.4 million in 2011 before a soar to NZ$ 325.3 million by the end of the period. Similarly, China and Russia were a significant increase in the value of Kiwi from NZ$ 74.9 million and NZ$ 0.968 million, respectively.
In contrast, Mexico spent the least on importing Kiwi in New Zealand approximately NZ$ 6.0 million in 2010 and plummeted to NZ$ 3.3 million in 2012. Moreover, Saudia Arabia decreased steadily NZ$ 290.000 to NZ$ 106,000 and NZ$ 82.000 finally.
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The given table illustrates (Illustrate means make a picture. ) fruit to five various nations in three years 2010, 2011 and 2012. (Your paragraph is not complete.
- The given table illustrates (Illustrate means make a picture.
- ) fruit to five various nations in three years 2010, 2011 and 2012.
- (Your paragraph is not complete.
- ) Units are measured in NZ$.
- Overall, Japan is the largest Kiwi export market in for New Zealand by more than a factor of three over China, the second largest.
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The given table illustrates (Illustrate means make a picture. Use it for process maps, maps and diagrams, not for tables and charts.) lists / gives / documents / records the amount of income that New Zealand earned from exporting Kiwi (Not a proper noun.) fruit to five various nation
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