IELTS Writing Task 1

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The chart illustrates the average number of hours each day Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spend doing three recreational activities (go to the beach, reading books, and visiting places) while on vacation in Greece in August 2015.

Overall, it is obvious that going to the beach, there was not any significant change in the number of tourists to holiday over the period. By and large, people who spend lots of time reading books was the most popular trend throughout the period, receiving around 8 hours and 4 hours annually.
Reading books hit the highest point at about 8 hours of the Chinese tourists who spent lots of time to do with that. Following the general pattern outlined above, around 5 hours of the American tourists and Turkish tourists spend a lot of doing leisure activities. Brazilian tourists failing to reach 4 hours.
Chinese tourists spent 3 hours going to the beach and this increased slightly to 4 hours of the American tourists. Turkish tourists and Brazilian tourists had a lot of ex-curricular activities, with going to the beach having around 5 hours per day and 6 hours per day respectively. Visiting places having around 3 hours of the people while Chinese tourists hit the lowest point at about 1 hour of the people spend time with this.