IELTS Writing Task 1

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The diagrams provide information about the design of a wind turbine where it should be placed.

According to the diagrams, the wind turbine which can produce energy include blades made from fiberglass or wood, a wind sensor, a generator, a steel tower, and a computer to get the information from sensor adjusts blades. A large turbine would be built on the top of the tower when the wind flowing, it will be spin. As a result, these turbines can produce 1.5 megawatts of power. Then, the detects the speed and direction of the wind and the information will send to the computer.

While the locations may be different, the turbines themselves all have the same special shape. They consist of a tall tower made of strong streel and on top of this, there are three blades made of fiberglass of wood. The wind turbine can be optimum when it is placed in the right position around the sea. It gives output than the turbine which existed in the domestic turbine. Meanwhile, the turbine is controlled by a computer which can alter the direction and angle of the blades to receive information from a sensor.

Overall, it is obvious that this is the way to generate energy power by using a natural source like the wind.