Ielts writing task 1

The line graph demonstrates the figures of accesses to Music Choice and Pop Parade on the web over a period of 15 days. Units are measured in thousand.It can be clearly seen that there was a fluctuation in both. The number of visits to Music Choice was significantly higher than that of Pop Parade.

It's worth noticing that the number of people using Music Choice was much more than that of the other, at approximately 40.000 and close to 120.000 respectively. Over the following eight days, both Music choice and Pop parade witnessed a fluctuation. The number of visits to Music choice, on average, was nearly three times higher than that of Pop parade. From seventh to ninth day, the distance of two music sites was closer at over 30.000 in Pop choice and nearly 25.000 in Pop parade.

Between the ninth and eleventh day, there was an upward trend in Pop parade from over 40.000 to nearly 160.000 while Music Choice fluctuated. On the twelfth day, Music choice overtook over 110.000 whereas Pop parade fell sharply by over 80.000. From thirteenth to fifteenth day, people visiting to Pop parade increased significantly and reached a peak of nearly 170.000. In contrast, after rising steeply and peaked at close to 130.000, the figures of visits dropped dramatically to 70.000.