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Hello! I'm preparing for my IELTS exam. I chosed this question from Cambridge IELTS 7 (test 2). I'm hoping for some comments. Thank you very much!

The line graph gives the information about the use of four type of meat in the European country from 1979 to 2004.

Overall, there was more fluctuation in chicken, beef and lamp in 25 years. On the beside that, although the consumption of fish decreased slightly, there wasn’t any large change in the period of time.

It can be seen from the graph before 1989, the consumption of beef was the highest, and reached a pick of about 250 grams in 1983. The figures for chicken and lamp were lower, but they have a different trend, the increase for chicken and the decrease for lamb. However, fish had the lowest number with about 50 grams.

In the period between 1989 and 2004, the European country witnessed a significant growth in the consumption of chicken, about 250 grams in 2004. On beside that, there was a powerful decrease in beef and lamp, 100 grams of beef compared to about 60 grams of lamp in 2004. The consumption of fish was the lowest and remain above 50 grams per person per week.

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The line graph gives ~~the~~ information about the use (wrong word) of four type (wrong form) of meat in the (wrong word) European country from 1979 to 2004.

Overall, there was more fluctuation (wrong word) in chicken, beef and lamp (wrong word) in 25 years. On the beside that, (wrong phrase) although the consumption of fish decreased slightly, there wasn’t any large change in the period of time. (wrong usage. The period of time did not change at all. "The consumption of fish decreased slightly over the 25-year period, from slightly over 50 grams per person per week in 1979, to slightly under that value in 2004.)

~~It can be seen from the graph~~ Before 1989 (There is no data shown before 1979.) , the consumption of beef was the highest, and reached a pick (wrong word) of about 250 grams (That is not the units of measure on the Y-axis.) in 1983. (Fragment, not a complete sentence.) The figures for chicken and lamp (wrong word) were lower, but they have a different trend, (wrong form) the increase (wrong form) for chicken and the decrease (wrong form) for lamb. However, fish had the lowest number with about 50 grams.

In the period between 1989 and 2004, the European country witnessed a significant growth in the consumption of chicken, about 250 grams in 2004. On beside that, there was a ~~powerful~~ decrease in beef and lamp, 100 grams of beef compared to about 60 grams of lamp in 2004. The consumption of fish was the lowest and remain above 50 grams per person per week. (Good! That is the correct measurement.)

Fluctuation looks like this:

Fluctuation around a trend line:

Anonymous · Answer

The line graph provides information about the usage of four different types of meat in the European country from 1979 to 2004.

Overall, it is evident that consumption of chicken fluctuated a lot yet significantly increased over the period, while usage of lamb and beef in the European countries significantly decreased. Meanwhile, fish consumed by Europeans declined marginally throughout the given period.

The European country consumed almost 150 grams of chicken per week at the start of the period, which significantly increased reaching a high point of almost 250 grams by 2004. Although, consumption of beef was at the highest, being eaten around 200 grams per week in 1979, which eventually fluctuated and declined to around 100 grams by the end of the period.

In 1979, it is apparent that exactly 150 grams of lambs were eaten in the European countries, yet sharply declining to around 50 grams over the given period. With a similar trend, consumption of fish witnessed a marginal dip form 60 grams in 1979 to 50 grams in 2010.

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