IELTS writing task 1

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

My answer:

The given maps illustrate proposals for upgrading the town center called Islip in the future.

In general, the town will change considerably after completing planned constructions. There will have new transport infrastructures as well as convenient facilities.

The first detail is to note that the Dual carriageway will be constructed around the town center and linked the prior Main road. The countryside in the North will be exploited aim to serve for expanding the town towards the North. As a result, shops from the North will be replaced by a shopping center which is located between a bus station and a car park. The new residential area connected with the highway will be also established beside the car park. The Main road comes across the center of town from the west to the east will be merely for walking people.

Apart from the dual carriageway come along constructions in the South and a new housing next to the park, they seem not too many changes.

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