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IELTS writing task 1

The table shows how much time an average British genders spend on various daily activities .

The most striking feature you can see from table is that citizens in UK make use of a substantial proportion of their time to sleep, followed by leisure activities. Additionally, there are the big disticntion in the amount of time used for work , study and housekeeping of UK males and females.

In more details, the amount of time men and women allocate to sleep is about 8 hours each day and the second highest position belongs to recreational activities which males spend 5 hours and a quarter of hour while females spend 32 minutes less than that of males. Especially, of all leisure activities, the most outstanding activity is watch TV and listen to music accounting for almost half the total time of leisure activities.

More remarkably, while women work and educate occupying 2,26 hours, masculines consume 79 minutes more than that of females. Nevertheless, the proportion of feminine gender time for housework and take care of their children is over double the time of men.

  

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Your use of "gender" is unnatural.


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