IELTS Writing Task 1
Can you please check the essay I wrote ? Thank you in advance.
The diagram illustrates how coffee is produced.
Overall, there are 11 stages in the production of coffee.
The process begins with coffee beans being collected and dried. After that, the beans are roasted and subsequently cooled down at low temperatures. The process continues with grinding those beans and mixing them with water at high temperatures. The mixture is then frozen, followed by the frozen liquid being put through a grinder.
The process ends with the liquid being dried with a vacuum and packed into jars for consuming.
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This is a seriously under-length answer (87 words). The word-count for Task 1 is 150 so you should aim for something between 160 and 180 words to make sure that you won't be given penalty for being under length. Try to develop your first, second, and last paragraph to solve the problem.
- This is a seriously under-length answer (87 words).
- The word-count for Task 1 is 150 so you should aim for something between 160 and 180 words to make sure that you won't be given penalty for being under length.
- Try to develop your first, second, and last paragraph to solve the problem.
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This is a seriously under-length answer (87 words). The word-count for Task 1 is 150 so you should aim for something between 160 and 180 words to make sure that you won't be given penalty for being under length.
Try to develop your first, second, and last paragraph to solve the problem. It would be also of help to you to read some sample answers of different essay types (chart, map, proc
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