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Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS writing task 1

The chart gives information about twelve countries in terms of the number of medals that they won at the Olympic.

It is clear that USA was the country won significantly most medals, namely gold medals, silver and bronze medals at Olympic games. While the number of medals in other countries tend to be quite similar.

We can see that USA has won the most medals, total 2,300 medals, namely 900 gold medals, over 700 silver and about bronze medals. The second place was Soviet Union, with just 1,000 medals. And the amount of gold medals were more than the amount of the amount of silver and bronze medals.

It can be seen that there were only 4 countries, UK, France, Germany and Italy, won more than 500 medals. And It is noticeable that China was the only country has won higher number of gold medals than other countries.

  

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I have highlighted the errors. You need to study relative pronouns. The chart gives information about twelve countries in terms of the number of medals that they won at the Olympic .

  • I have highlighted the errors.
  • You need to study relative pronouns.
  • The chart gives information about twelve countries in terms of the number of medals that they won at the Olympic .
  • (wrong form) It is clear that USA was the country (missing word) won the significantly most medals (won significantly more medals than the other countries) , namely gold medals, silver and bronze medals at Olympic games.
  • While the number of medals in other countries tend (wrong form) to be quite similar.
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I have highlighted the errors. You need to study relative pronouns.


The chart gives information about twelve countries in terms of the number of medals that they won at the Olympic. (wrong form)

It is clear that USA was the country (missing word) won the significantly

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