Ielts writing task 1

Hello everyone, my name is William. Please help me correct and mark the following writting for task 1. Much obliged.

The first bar chart decribes the important reasons for study among students of different ages while the second chart illustrates the amount of support from employers.

It is clear from the charts that students tend to study for interest more than for career when they get older. However, the highest level of employer support is for those student who mainly study for career purposes.

The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years, study for their career. This percentage gradually declines by 10-20% every decade. Only 40% of 40-49 yr old and 18% of over 49yr olds are studying for career reasons in late adulthood.

Conversely, the first graph also shows that study stemming from interest increases with age. There are only 10% of under 26yr old studying out of interest. The percentage increases slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade, and increases dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly same number of 40-49yr olds suty for career and interest. However 70% of over 49yrr olds study for interest in comparison to 18% studying for career reason in that age group.

The second graph shows that employer support is maximum ( approximately 60% for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the third decade of life, and then increases in late adulthood up to about 44%.