IELTS Writing Task 1

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Here is my writing:

The tables compares five different nations in terms of the percentage of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in 2002.

Overall, all of these countries spent the largest proportions of expenses on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

First, the percentage of expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco consumption in Turkey and Ireland is the two highest, at 32.14% and 28.91% respectively. In contrast, the data for foods drinks, and tobaccos in Italy, Spain and Sweden was lower, at over 15%.

Second, the statistics for expenditure on clothing and footwear was the highest in Italy, at 9%, which is opposed to the figure for Sweden, at 5.4%. The other three countries spent on average around 6.5%

Last, the smallest proportion of expenditure on leisure and education accounted for under 5% in all countries. The proportion of money spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%. Conversely, Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for clothing/footwear, at 1.98%.