IELTS Writing Part 2: Laws and rules Topic.

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Some people argue that individuals' freedom should be in accordance with laws and rules, otherwise, society cannot function as it should be.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

There are several arguments that society cannot function the way it should without individuals' freedom in harmony with laws and rules. To my way of thinking, this is such right a way to address the topic.

First and foremost, were there no correlation between individuals' freedom and rules and laws, society would turn into chaos. There would be no barriers to keep people within limits, which in response would result in the rise of crimes such as murders, robberies, thefts - to name a few. In addition to political benefits, laws and rules also are used to orient people to moral values, to guide people to behave with manners. Moreover, as people didn't adhere to anything collectively, nothing would exist as social standards to justify whether a specific action was right or wrong, and people's judgments about legal actions as well as misdeeds would vary dramatically. In return, it would lead to no conflict-solving taking place. As the conflicts kept escalating, there was no safety or security, and society could not thrive.

While there are no doubts to be cast that one needs to adjust their own freedom within social's discipline, all the rules and laws out there must be a combination of reasonable, beneficial, and able to represent human rights. As for how it was expressed crystal clear in the history of mankind, whenever rules and laws were no longer for the good of each and every member of the whole, people got dissatisfied, and those of which were initially born as the means to regulate the society ended as obstacles to the prominence of it. Therefore, laws and orders should be viewed as a way to both ensure and promo citizen's legal rights, not to contradict them at any means. Maintaining individuals' freedom within the existing legal frame helps people act and behave freely, but not in a way that disrupts society's development.

In short, as more and more people consider individual's freedom an essential part, things should be taken into account how people utilize them to facilitate the public's good, or whether they will just be used as an excuse to be selfish and show no respect to social standards. Not only does discipline set people free, but it also ensures society can function exactly as it should. On the other hand, people have the right to raise the voice, and as a matter of fact that all rules and laws are created by humans, all their subjective flaws need to be addressed and discarded regularly.