Ielts writing essay task 1

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the bar chart illustrates how frequently individuals in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

at first glance is evident that, over this ten years, the most percent of citizens in USA ate fast food once a weak and once or twice a month by more than 25 percent while, there is low percent of people in USA who never had eaten fast food and who had fast food dishes in everyday by less than 5 percent. meanwhile, having fast food several times a week and a few times a year had moderate percent between 10 and 15 percent.

looking for more detail, in 2003 more than 30 percent of people ate fast food once a weak at the same time approximately 4 percent of people ate junk food every day. afterward, during 2006 more than 32 percent of individuals had junk food once a weak, which was similar percent in 2013 for people who ate once or twice a month. correspondingly, during 2006 and 2013, the fewer citizens ate fast food every day and had never eaten fast food, subsequently with 3 percent and 4 percent.