Ielts writing

Task 1:

The bar chart gives the information about the changes in the proportion of individuals going to cinema theatre on several days in a European country from 2003 to 2007.

Overall, overarching trends was most people usually went to the cinemas on weekend. In addition, on weekdays, the percentage increased after 4 years except on Wednesday.

To begin with in 2003 the highest rate of cinema goers was 40% on Saturday which was 10% higher than the second one on Friday and Sunday. After two years, it reached a peak at 45% and saw a slight decline in the end of the period which was in a similar way with the rate on Sunday. Meanwhile, the proportion on Friday remained steadily during this time frame.

On the other hand, the ratio of movie watcher on Monday was the lowest at the beginning of the period with only 10% which was twice smaller than the ratio on Tuesday. In two years’ time, it uplifted to nearly 15% while the rate on Tuesday and Wednesday showed a mild decrease to around 15%. In 2007, it was seen a modest growth of the rate on Tuesday to under 20% while on Monday and Wednesday the proportion plunged respectively to 15% and 8%.

Task 2:

Thanks to the development of technology, people nowadays store knowledge not only in paper materials but also on the internet. In my point of view, I do think that the advantage of this new method outweighs the disadvantages.

To begin with one reason why memorizing information on the internet is advantageous is that the numbers of information it can store is much higher than books. This is because writing and publishing a book take a lot of time. Normally the book takes about a month or more to write and publish to readers. Meanwhile with the same story, author just need to type the text and finally updated on some websites for literature or science which only require from one to two weeks. As a result, people can preserve more information at this way and just have to spend half time compared to the traditional way.

Another benefit of this method is that it can have some positive impacts on the environment in the near future. On account of publishing paper materials, people have to cut down myriad of trees to create quality books. Consequently, it leads to the lack of inhabits of many animal species and also cause some environmental issues such as climate change, flood and soil erosion. As long as all knowledge become capable to store on the internet, people no longer have to cut down tree to make books anymore.

However, they're still one downside preserving information on the internet is that the information can be changed easily on the internet. For instance, Wikipedia which is one of the biggest websites providing knowledge about science, history and music, have a million people searching and using every single day. But sometimes the information on this website is changed incorrectly by some people who do it just for fun or want to gain more attention. As a result, if people cannot fix that incorrect information, it can lead to some serious misunderstandings.

In conclusion although they're still limitation about reserving information on the internet I believe that scientists can improve it. In addition, because of those benefit it bring to human being, I suppose that it will soon replace completely the old way of storing.