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Thảo Tâm Posted 4 years ago
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The table provides information about the number of bicycles drivers in a town from 0 to more than 60 years old in 2011.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of women who rode bikes in the town was always higher than men. Besides, children who were from 0 to 9 age accounted for the highest percentage, and the lowest position belonged to the fourth group which was from 40 to 59 years old.

Looking at the table more closely, one can see that female tended to ride bicycles when they were young, from 0 to 9 age, at most. The statistics decreased dramatically through the ages, and rose a little bit, 18,5%, when it came to the last group, more than 60 years old.

Similarly, the male group reached the top point at 50,3% at the first age group. A violent decline was seen in the following group, and it got the bottom position at 8.0% for the fourth group. In terms of the last group, the percentage was gone up, 13,2%.

  

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