IELTS WRITING

This line graph describes USA marathon records by age. Entirely, male intends to
run longer than female, the graph indicates the age from 10 to 60 years old. First of
all, both males and females have the nearly same indications (3 hours). But it is
more different when the age modifies, the recording time changes evidently, the
distance between the time is approximate 0,2 hours. These things show that male
develop more enhance and stronger than female. It nearly resembles the previous
distance until the age of 30. At that age, people demonstrate the strongest and
fastest time of the marathon. Perhaps it tends to fail after the age of 30 when your
body ageing, your body represents some expressions. And the fastest time recorded
by both females and males is the age of 30, the line tends to decrease down to the
age of 40, you can observe the evident distinction and the line goes down until the
age of 50. There are the large differences, the line represents for male goes down
evenly and properly. In contrast, the line depicts female fall dramatically and
uncontrollably (male 2.45 hours and female 3.15 hours). Observe the line, you can
see the up and down changes between female and male. In conclusion, the line
graph below gives information about USA marathon records by age, and it is a
warning message for female: focus more on your health so that not only you can
keep your body healthy but also reduce the ageing rate.