IELTS WRITING

Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the health care system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing.What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?

It is sometimes argued that the improvements brought by governments in health care system are temporary and have no durable benefits, yet the idea is enlightened by a substantial drop in the developed ’s citizens’ standard of physical health. This essay will provide implied reasons for the problem and predict some long term effects it may have on the society in general.

The cause for such issue happening in already-grown countries is due to the busy life people experience. Pursuing hustling lifestyle may make them stick to the convenience of fast food like hamburgers or French fries, which is in the long run will cause obesity and increase the risk of heart diseases. Especially in advanced societies, moreover, people tend to lead a sedentary life as the majority of them are white collars. By virtue of the help of robots and systematic design, these people are no longer have to do physical work like sweeping or cleaning. And with high payment, they get used to their own office and work room thus lack both exercises and outdoor activities, therefore leaving muscles and bones untrained then getting weak and degenerating.

People growing older while lacking in physical health to perform their own stuff will put pressure on the whole family and the society as well. GoverNments and scientists, for this reason, have to invest more money and spend more time to fix the health care system instead of spending this finances in maintaining cultural features and helping migrates, not mention global warming matter that needs great fund to run analysis on. Moreover, if the puzzle continues, the supply of strong blue collar will not be enough to support the country – in construction task for example, which implies direct effect on the workforce as well as costing in the import of labour pool.

In conclusion, by doing thorough researches on health care services, there are many more problems that developed countries need to come over in order to maintain their positions. The governments in those communities are now still working hard to find alternatives to resolve the conflicts between high-tech growing and the gradual loss of human physical health.