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Ielts wring task 1

The bar chart compares the Asian in terms of the proportion of people who passes the driving test in 1980 and 2010.
During the period, the percentage of passing the driving test in woman was highest. Meanwhile, the man who success in the driving test was by far lowest.
Only 28% of the man's figure passing driving test in 1980 while the proportion of women who passes the driving test was on 48%. The chart shows that the proportion of woman completed the test experienced slightly increased, at 51%. By contract, the man's figure successful in the driving test witness sharply went up, at 38%.
During the half period, the man's figure completed the test stable and seemed to nochange approximately 49% in 2000 to 2010. Meanwhile, woman who passes the test account for approximately 65%, see the slightly went down, and still keep the highest number in the table.

  

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