IELTS Task1. Can you please review my writing

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph demonstrates the amount of money which was earned by three bakeries in London over a ten years period between 2000 and 2010.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that Robbie's and Bernie's bakeries experienced a significant rise, while there was a substantial fall in Lovely Loaves income amount over the period in the question. Another interesting point is that Lovely Loaves had the most income at 2000, while after ten years Robbie's bakery earned more money than others. Also, Robbie's bakery reached the highest income in the period at 2010.
Looking at the details, Robbie's bakery income remained stable between 2000 and 2005. It surged between 2007 and 2008 from around 6000 to just under 100000. In addition, we can see an upward trend in Bernie's Buns bakery income in the first four years. After that it stabilized for four years and then started to rise from around 40000 to almost 60000 and placed at the second most popular bakery among others.

On the other side, Lovely Loaves, fluctuated at the first five years and reached the peak of almost 100000 at 2001. However it had a downward trend, it still earned the most amount of money for the first six years. It plunged between 2004 and 2005 and finally reached a yearly income of about 40000.

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